Jan Tinneberg on Unsplash

天邊的雲彩淺淺的笑說，是誰想留住那揮手的衣袖?
紅泥小火爐的溫度測試著，海角天涯的距離。


<div class="draft-block draft--p left">「也許我們該如此道別並<br> 微笑<br>放任音符如秋光的記憶<br>停駐在奔流歲月的彼端… …」</div>
<div class="draft-block draft--p left">瀟灑別離，想起徐志摩的「再別康橋」。</div>

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              <a href="/user/@61dd28cbfd8978000151317c" target="_blank" class="draft--mention">
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                <span>李英華</span>
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             第一句，揮一揮衣袖，不帶走一片雲彩...</div>

「也許我們該如此道別並
 微笑
放任音符如秋光的記憶
停駐在奔流歲月的彼端… …」

瀟灑別離，想起徐志摩的「再別康橋」。

<div class="draft-block draft--p left">如此深摯動人~😌</div>

<div class="draft-block draft--p left">
              <a href="/user/@moniquelu" target="_blank" class="draft--mention">
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                <span>麋鹿林</span>
              </a>
             </div>
<div class="draft-block draft--p left">「可憐今夕月，向何處、去悠悠。是別有人間，那邊才見，光影東頭。」--辛棄疾の千年大預言😆</div>
<div class="draft-block draft--p left">祝 好夢~</div>
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              <a href="/user/@6thgoat" target="_blank" class="draft--mention">
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                <span>6号羊の三流世界</span>
              </a>
             太感謝了，評論得這麽好，都要笑著入睡啦...</div>

<div class="draft-block draft--p left">
              <a href="/user/@moniquelu" target="_blank" class="draft--mention">
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                <span>麋鹿林</span>
              </a>
             </div>
<div class="draft-block draft--p left">雖然不具評詩的資格，但您的詩化用了相當豐沛的古今詩作，卻能巧妙融鑄，情意貼合，詞達於心切，念著於情深，整體而言是含蓄蘊藉的~☺️</div>

<div class="draft-block draft--p left">
              <a href="/user/@6thgoat" target="_blank" class="draft--mention">
                <i class="icon-mention"></i>
                <span>6号羊の三流世界</span>
              </a>
             謝謝喜歡！寫詩比較容易表達情感，又時又覺得情感過多外顯，兩難...</div>

<div class="draft-block draft--p left">我沒有賞詩的能力但讀了又覺得動人～</div>

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                <span>三土</span>
              </a>
             讀詩，就是感受和想像的過程而已。謝謝喜歡這首。😄☺️</div>

我沒有賞詩的能力但讀了又覺得動人～

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詩的吉光片羽

我喜愛寫作，希望在這個園地能和一些喜歡文字的格友交流。目前定居美國。

麋鹿林的沙龍

討論區

閱讀的黃昏

電影筆記本

也是捕風

極短篇創作

送君千里

李英華 第一句，揮一揮衣袖，不帶走一片雲彩...

文化生活

「可憐今夕月，向何處、去悠悠。是別有人間，那邊才見，光影東頭。」--辛棄疾の千年大預言😆

6号羊の三流世界 太感謝了，評論得這麽好，都要笑著入睡啦...

雖然不具評詩的資格，但您的詩化用了相當豐沛的古今詩作，卻能巧妙融鑄，情意貼合，詞達於心切，念著於情深，整體而言是含蓄蘊藉的~☺️

6号羊の三流世界 謝謝喜歡！寫詩比較容易表達情感，又時又覺得情感過多外顯，兩難...

圖文插畫

三土 讀詩，就是感受和想像的過程而已。謝謝喜歡這首。😄☺️

親子與教育

<h3 class="lexical__h3"><br><br></h3><div class="lexical__image center"><div class="lexical__imageWrapper"><img src="https://images.unsplash.com/photo-1529268209110-62be1d87fe75?crop=entropy&amp;cs=srgb&amp;fm=jpg&amp;ixid=M3wyNTY4N3wwfDF8c2VhcmNofDJ8fGdvb2RieWUlMjB8ZW58MHx8fHwxNzEzNTkwMjMyfDA&amp;ixlib=rb-4.0.3&amp;q=85" data-src="https://resize-image.vocus.cc/resize?norotation=true&amp;quality=80&amp;url=https%3A%2F%2Fimages.unsplash.com%2Fphoto-1529268209110-62be1d87fe75%3Fcrop%3Dentropy%26cs%3Dsrgb%26fm%3Djpg%26ixid%3DM3wyNTY4N3wwfDF8c2VhcmNofDJ8fGdvb2RieWUlMjB8ZW58MHx8fHwxNzEzNTkwMjMyfDA%26ixlib%3Drb-4.0.3%26q%3D85&amp;width=740&amp;sign=eTVh4x5dpttJxwpV0VOpTb6oCaS1LNY0_InkwS2tiTE" data-loaded="true" data-original-src="https://images.unsplash.com/photo-1529268209110-62be1d87fe75?crop=entropy&amp;cs=srgb&amp;fm=jpg&amp;ixid=M3wyNTY4N3wwfDF8c2VhcmNofDJ8fGdvb2RieWUlMjB8ZW58MHx8fHwxNzEzNTkwMjMyfDA&amp;ixlib=rb-4.0.3&amp;q=85" data-lowquality="false" data-width="2739" data-height="1826" data-retry="0" onerror="Number(this.dataset.retry) > 4 ? this.src='/static/default-error-img.svg': (() => {this.src=this.dataset.originalSrc; this.dataset.retry = Number(this.dataset.retry)+1;})()" data-istopthreeimage="true" alt="raw-image"><div class="lexical__image_source"><a href="https://unsplash.com/@craft_ear?utm_source=vocus&amp;utm_medium=referral" target="_blank" rel="noreferrer">Jan Tinneberg on Unsplash</a></div></div><div></div></div><p class="lexical__paragraph"><br></p><p class="lexical__paragraph" style="text-align: center;" dir="ltr"><b><strong class="lexical__textBold" style="white-space: pre-wrap;">天邊的雲彩淺淺的笑說，</strong></b><blockquote class="lexical__quote" style="text-align: center;" dir="ltr"><b><strong class="lexical__textBold" style="white-space: pre-wrap;">是誰想留住那揮手的衣袖?</strong></b></blockquote></p><p class="lexical__paragraph" style="text-align: center;" dir="ltr"><b><strong class="lexical__textBold" style="white-space: pre-wrap;">紅泥小火爐的溫度測試著，</strong></b><blockquote class="lexical__quote" style="text-align: center;" dir="ltr"><b><strong class="lexical__textBold" style="white-space: pre-wrap;">海角天涯的距離。</strong></b></blockquote></p><p class="lexical__paragraph" style="text-align: center;" dir="ltr"><br></p><p class="lexical__paragraph" style="text-align: center;" dir="ltr"><b><strong class="lexical__textBold" style="white-space: pre-wrap;">西窗不曾燭滅，</strong></b><blockquote class="lexical__quote" style="text-align: center;" dir="ltr"><b><strong class="lexical__textBold" style="white-space: pre-wrap;">只因歸來有期。</strong></b></blockquote></p><blockquote class="lexical__quote" style="text-align: center;" dir="ltr"><b><strong class="lexical__textBold" style="white-space: pre-wrap;">松林明月的他鄉，</strong></b><blockquote class="lexical__quote" style="text-align: center;" dir="ltr"><b><strong class="lexical__textBold" style="white-space: pre-wrap;">捎來海浪無聲的寄語… …</strong></b></blockquote></blockquote><blockquote class="lexical__quote" style="text-align: center;" dir="ltr"><br></blockquote><p class="lexical__paragraph" style="text-align: center;" dir="ltr"><b><strong class="lexical__textBold" style="white-space: pre-wrap;">長亭古道的故事,</strong></b><blockquote class="lexical__quote" style="text-align: center;" dir="ltr"><b><strong class="lexical__textBold" style="white-space: pre-wrap;">編織在沙城金色的薄暮裡。</strong></b></blockquote><p class="lexical__paragraph" style="text-align: center;" dir="ltr"><b><strong class="lexical__textBold" style="white-space: pre-wrap;">也許我們該如此道別並</strong></b></p></p><p class="lexical__paragraph" style="text-align: center;" dir="ltr"><b><strong class="lexical__textBold" style="white-space: pre-wrap;">微笑</strong></b></p><p class="lexical__paragraph" style="text-align: center;" dir="ltr"><b><strong class="lexical__textBold" style="white-space: pre-wrap;">放任音符如秋光的記憶</strong></b><blockquote class="lexical__quote" style="text-align: center;" dir="ltr"><b><strong class="lexical__textBold" style="white-space: pre-wrap;">停駐在奔流歲月的彼端… …</strong></b></blockquote></p><h3 class="lexical__h3" style="text-align: center;" dir="ltr"><br><br></h3><p class="lexical__paragraph" style="text-align: center;" dir="ltr"><span style="white-space: pre-wrap;">PS 朋友回台，送別之作</span></p>