Raising pets is not a temporary life experience, but a life-long commitment to animals.
我承認這次寫作比較有挑戰,因為我長大後很少到公園這類地方走動,不過幸好有一點過往經驗可以參考,還是可以寫出作文,只是我不否認有加強的空間。
我們先來看作文題目的指示是什麼:
根據上述題目指示,我認為第二段的寫作較困難,因為這可以涉及到五感(視覺、聽覺、觸覺、嗅覺、味覺)的描述,又是因為也要從近乎零的狀況憑空想像,筆者認為如果能跨及兩種或三種感官的描述,我覺得就是相當優秀的回答了。
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To begin with, Park A is the ideal place for children because it contains numerous facilities for them to have fun. Additionally, their parents could watch their children engaging in various physical activities closely as seats are arranged nearby the facilities. As to Park B, it is filled with lush green plants and trees where people can breathe in fresh air while relishing the spectacular scenery. It also seems that people could enjoy the tranquil atmosphere.
My ideal park would be the combination of Park A and Park B, resembling Da An Park in Taipei. People could choose whatever activity they want to do based on their preferences. For instance, I love taking a stroll along the paths while basking in the warm sunshine in the afternoon. Some may opt for exercises, including badminton, soccer, etc. Others may just lie down on the grass and enjoy their picnic time. Anyway, I believe that diverse activities accompanied by beautiful scenery are the most significant elements of my ideal park. (共 168 字)
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