英文作文技巧加文章分享

前文

繼上次的國寫寫作，這次我想來分享英文作文。不過，有把題目和文章保存下來的就只有接下來這篇，所以英文寫作可能就不會像國寫一樣寫那麼多篇。

寫作小技巧

起手式

With the remarkable advancement in ...... / booming prosperity of ...... / significant development of ...... , contempary society has cultivated a profound awareness of the significance of ...... , consenquently fueling the surge in ......

點點點的地方就是填入題目要的主題，例如說是要討論健康飲食議題可以這樣寫

With the remarkable advancement in medicine and the significant development of pharmacy , comtempary society has cultivated a profound awareness of the significance of health , consenquently fueling the surge in super food.

如此，慢慢地遶入主題

當然，也不一定要完成的仿造，我們可以適時地做一些改變，例如現在要探討的是環保議題

With the booming prosperity of the economy and the remarkable advancement in technology , plenty of advanced factorys are built . However, ...... 進入環保議題

其他小技巧之一，文章架構

開頭寫好了，正文也不能落掉。在英文文章中，若要論述一件事會先用一句話來概括，後面再詳細介紹，有點像在畫樹狀圖。這種方式尤以論說文中堪用，例如，當我們要討論健康議題，先概述說「運動有益身心健康」「吃少鹽少糖的食物」接著在從這兩點往下細說它們各自的優點，「運動可以使我們身體強壯不易感冒，此外......」「吃太多糖會得糖尿病(diabetes怕自己忘記><)，並且......」

正常來說應該要列三點，不過一時間想不出來(><)，然後要注意的是，列出來的項目盡量選好寫的，像「吃少鹽少糖的食物」這個舉例個人覺得其實不太好，因為難以講太多。

列點這部分可以在下筆前先大概的寫在紙上，才不會寫到後來迷失自己。

其他小技巧之二，善用形容詞和副詞

善用形容詞不只可以讓閱卷老師知道原來我們懂得這麼多單字(因此考前狂背單字超有效😆)，還可以使文章加長

副詞，像是 moreover、furthermore超級好用，敘述事情時可以幫助自己延伸的更廣。還有，像首先(first of all、first、to start with、at the begining)、其次(second、next)、最後(last but not least、finally)或是最後要總結(all in all總而言之、to sum up總而言之、in conclusion總結來說)，這些常常用到的可以在考前先準備起來。

總結的部分還可以用「雖然他有...的缺點，但...更勝於...」

(本人非英文專業，所以以上大家可當作參考就好。若句子有文法或拼字錯誤，還請不吝指教。🥰)

文章

題目：隨著網路的普及,利用社群平台進行的網路詐騙(internet fraud/online scam)也越來越普遍。請就此主題寫一篇作文,第一段說明一種或多種常見的網路詐騙方式;第二段說明若親身遇到網路詐騙會如何應對與處理

我的：

With the remarkable advancement in internet and the booming prosperity of the economy, internet fraud has been increasingly common through the social platforms, so it is significant that we should be familiar with the methods online scam use to prevent us from losing wealth or individual objects. Following are two methods that we might frequently meet. First, we will receive a strange e-mail. Content in the e-mail might tell receivers that he or she has a wrong step when they were paying the item on the Internet. And then, the email will guide receivers how to fix it step by step. While doing so, they have already fallen victim to internet fraud by providing the scammer with the information the scammer want. Second, when we want to buy something online, we sign in the shopping website. However, we are seldom aware of whether the website is authentic or not. Some websites will camouflage themselves and get users' information when they sign in.

There are various methods that can protect us from being cheated. As for me, I always check the website's URL before I visit this website. By doing so, I can know whether there are any issues in it previously because URL can offer some information honestly.

chatgpt改寫：

In the ever-evolving landscape of the internet and the flourishing state of the economy, the prevalence of internet fraud has reached new heights, particularly through social platforms. Navigating this digital realm requires a deep understanding of the methodologies employed by online scammers, aiming to protect individuals from potential financial losses or jeopardizing personal belongings. Below, I elaborate on two frequently encountered methods of internet fraud. Firstly, individuals often find themselves receiving suspicious emails-an avenue commonly exploited by scammers. These deceptive emails may assert that an error occurred during an online payment. Subsequently, the email provides step-by-step instructions on how to rectify the purported issue. Tragically, individuals who follow these instructions unknowingly become victims of internet fraud, unwittingly providing scammers with the sensitive information they seek. Secondly, the act of making online purchases presents another avenue for potential scams. When individuals sign in to shopping websites, they frequently neglect to verify the authenticity of the platform. Some deceptive websites camouflage themselves, exploiting users by collecting personal information during the sign-in process.

To fortify against falling prey to scams, a diverse array of protective measures can be employed. Personally, I adhere to a practice of meticulously checking a website's URL before navigating to it. This practice allows me to discern whether the website has a history of issues, as URLs often reveal transparent and honest information. By remaining vigilant and adopting such precautionary measures, individuals can actively contribute to fostering a safer online experience for everyone involved. In conclusion, the ever-increasing complexity of internet fraud necessitates a proactive approach in educating oneself about potential threats and implementing robust protective measures. The incorporation of such strategies not only shields individuals from falling victim to scams but also contributes to the creation of a secure digital environment for all users.

呼~終於打完了❤️