【國語寫作】【浮光】成果建議(0922)

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<div class="lexical__image center"><div class="lexical__imageWrapper"><img src="https://resize-image.vocus.cc/resize?norotation=true&amp;quality=80&amp;url=https%3A%2F%2Fimages.vocus.cc%2Ffce226bf-9acd-4607-bda1-bcf5efd1db3a.jpg&amp;width=740&amp;sign=z81XxrE0wjUivw2qC6Frc2dovOx9hquGAhhSGk23PgM" fetchpriority="high" data-src="https://resize-image.vocus.cc/resize?norotation=true&amp;quality=80&amp;url=https%3A%2F%2Fimages.vocus.cc%2Ffce226bf-9acd-4607-bda1-bcf5efd1db3a.jpg&amp;width=740&amp;sign=z81XxrE0wjUivw2qC6Frc2dovOx9hquGAhhSGk23PgM" data-loaded="true" data-original-src="https://images.vocus.cc/fce226bf-9acd-4607-bda1-bcf5efd1db3a.jpg" data-lowquality="false" data-width="4032" data-height="3024" data-retry="0" onerror="Number(this.dataset.retry) > 4 ? this.src='/static/default-error-img.svg': (() => {this.src=this.dataset.originalSrc; this.dataset.retry = Number(this.dataset.retry)+1;})()" data-istopthreeimage="true" alt="raw-image"></div><div></div></div> 【成果建議】<div class="ad-placeholder" style="min-height: 124px;"></div> 1 光源2 如糖絲的光線3 透然陌生4 一抹記憶5 破釜沉舟6 飛鳥的翅翼7 杳然如煙8 盡湧心頭9 ...10 暖和的漣漪11 褪換影子的輪廓