在Goodreads上看到一則讀者評論,提到《幸運之子》並行的雙敘事結構頗令人出戲,評論底下也有其他讀者紛紛表示認同。原文如下:"Add to the style a baggy structure that flips between 1985 and 2015, and a whole other story that has little connection to the first one other than featuring the same character, and the book started to alienate me further. What is it about contemporary authors that they almost all seem to think that they need multiple narratives, times switches and excess baggage to create a novel? A more careful, focused, intimate story of the AIDS crisis and its effects might have made this more palatable."