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Part 1_increase 同義動詞

該國人口在 1990 年之後持續上升。（rise）
The population of this country is constantly rising after 1990.

“is rising after…” → 時態錯誤，描述過去到現在的趨勢應用 past simple 或 present perfect
“constantly” → 用於不間斷的動作，不適合描述折線圖
“population of this country” → 冗長，可簡化為 “the country’s population”

修改後：The country’s population rose steadily after 1990.
模範答案：The population of the country showed a steady upward trend after 1990.

這兩座城市的就業人口在二十年間穩定成長。（grow）
The population of employment in the two cities was steady growing during the last 2 decades

“population of employment” → 不自然，應為 “the employed population” or “employment levels”
“was steady growing” → 形容詞應為 steadily（副詞）
“last 2 decades” → 不應使用 “last” 在圖表描述中（有時間軸）→ 用 “over the past two decades” 或 “over the 20-year period”

修改後：Employment levels in the two cities were steadily growing over the past two decades.
模範答案：The employed population in both cities grew steadily over the 20-year period.

2005 到 2010 年間，銷售數字逐漸攀升。(climb)
The sale profit was gradually climbing between 2005 and 2010.

“sale profit” → 不自然，應為 “sales figures” 或 “profits”
“was climbing” 可，但 Task 1 中用 climbed 更簡潔
"profit" 是不可數；"sales profit" 也不自然

修改後：Sales figures gradually climbed between 2005 and 2010.
模範答案：Sales gradually climbed throughout the period from 2005 to 2010.

2000 年後，網路使用率突然大幅飆升至 80%。(surge)
The use of internet dramatically surged up to 80% after 2000.

“use of internet” → the use of the Internet
“surged up to” → surge 本身就是 upward movement，不搭配 “up to”
“dramatically surged” 可以，但可更自然

修改後：The use of the Internet surged to 80% after 2000.
模範答案：Internet usage surged to 80% shortly after 2000.

旅遊成本在 2015 年後快速升高，成為主要趨勢。(escalate)
The cost of traveling rapidly escalates after 2015, becoming the trend.

時態：圖表→ past simple → escalated
“becoming the trend” → 不自然也不必要
“cost of traveling” → travel costs 更自然

修改後：Travel costs escalated rapidly after 2015.
模範答案：There was a rapid escalation in travel costs after 2015.

金融危機後，青年失業率突然跳升。(jump)
After the financial crisis, the rate of youngster unemployment suddenly jumps.

“youngster unemployment” → 不自然 → youth unemployment
時態錯誤：應用 jumped
“suddenly jumps” 不正式，避免現在式，suddenly不適合形容圖表
“rate of youth unemployment jumped” 才是自然語序

修改後：After the financial crisis, the youth unemployment rate suddenly jumped.
模範答案：Following the financial crisis, the youth unemployment rate jumped sharply.

2010 年後，租金價格明顯飆漲。(soar)
The rental price significantly soars after 2010.

時態問題 → soared
rental price → rental prices（可數）
significantly soar（OK，但 soar 本身 already strong）

修改後：Rental prices soared significantly after 2010.
模範答案：Rental prices soared after 2010, reaching their highest level.

智慧手機的普及率在五年間迅速暴增。(rocket)
The prevalence of smart phone rapidly rocketed during 5 years.

“prevalence of smart phone” → smartphone ownership
不說 “during 5 years”，說 “over a five-year period”
“rapidly rocketed” → rocket already means rapidly

修改後：Smartphone ownership rocketed over a five-year period.
模範答案：The proportion of people owning smartphones rocketed within just five years.

食品價格在整個期間穩步上升。(go up)
The food price steadily went up during the whole peroid.

food price → food prices
spelling: period
“whole period” 太口語 → “entire period”

修改後：Food prices steadily went up over the entire period.
模範答案：Food prices showed a steady upward movement throughout the period.

在短暫下降後，GDP 成長率在 2002 年開始再次回升。(pick up)
After a short reduction, the growth of GDP started to pick up in 2002

“short reduction” → slight decline
“the growth of GDP” → GDP growth
started to pick up → OK，但可更自然
start 物體、有動作的開始，V-ing/to V兩種都可以，但Ving更常見
begin 抽象、過程性的開始， V-ing/to V兩種都可以，但 to V 更常見

修改後：After a slight decline, GDP growth began to pick up in 2002.
模範答案：GDP growth picked up again in 2002 after a brief downturn.

醫療品質指標在 2005 年後逐漸改善。(improve)
The index of the medical quality was gradually improving after 2005.

“index of the medical quality” → medical quality index
Task 1 避免被動進行式 → “was improving” 用 improved 更清楚

修改後：The medical quality index gradually improved after 2005.
模範答案：There was a gradual improvement in the medical quality index after 2005.

高等教育的招生人數在 2000 年後持續擴大。(expand)
The enrollment of tertiary education after 2000 continuously expands.

enrollment in tertiary education
時態：expanded
continuously → steadily/consistently 更自然

修改後：Enrollment in tertiary education steadily expanded after 2000.
模範答案：Enrollment in tertiary education expanded steadily after 2000, reaching a much higher level.

Part 2_increase 同義名詞

圖表顯示 2010 年後人口出現明顯的上升。(rise)
The population after 2010 illustrates a significant rise.

illustrate 需要用圖表數據當主詞，如graph, chart, table, diagram
population after 2010（語序不自然）
rise 通常搭配 in + noun（a rise in population）

修改後：The chart shows a significant rise in population after 2010.
模範答案：There was a significant rise in population after 2010.

這段期間的經濟成長相當穩定。(growth)
The economics had a steady growth during this period.

economics = 經濟學（學科），不能代表「經濟」
“had a growth” 不自然 → "experienced / recorded growth"

修改後：The economy experienced steady growth during this period.
模範答案：The economy recorded steady growth over the period shown.

出國旅遊人次在 1990 年後呈現持續的攀升。(climb)
The number of traveling abroad presented a continuous climb after 1990.

number of traveling abroad → the number of people travelling abroad
presented a climb → 不自然， “show / experience”才是常見 collocation

修改後：The number of people travelling abroad showed a continuous climb after 1990.
模範答案：There was a continuous climb in the number of people travelling abroad after 1990.

2000 年後，網購消費出現大規模的激增。(surge)
After 2000, online shopping experienced a considerable surge.

句子可接受。唯一問題是 online shopping 應為 online shopping activity / spending
surge = 強烈，「considerable surge」語氣較弱但仍可，通常 surge = dramatic / sharp / sudden

修改後：After 2000, online shopping activity experienced a considerable surge.
模範答案：Online shopping saw a dramatic surge after 2000.

房地產市場在調整後出現明顯的復甦。(upswing)
The house market showed a marked upswing after alteration.

house market → housing market
after alteration 不清楚（應為 after a market adjustment）
alteration = 改動、修改（多指外觀、結構、形式的實質改變）
adjustment = 微調、調整（幅度小、目的在於更合適或更準確）
showed a marked upswing（可以，但不自然）

修改後：The housing market showed a marked upswing after the adjustment.
模範答案：There was a marked upswing in the housing market following the adjustment.

社會對環保議題的關注度呈現積極的提升。(uplift)
The focus of society on environment issues showed a substantial uplift.

environment issues → environmental issues
**uplift 通常不用在嚴謹數據描述（較口語），**但你是練習同義詞，可以用。

修改後：Societal attention to environmental issues showed a substantial uplift.
模範答案：There was a noticeable increase in public concern about environmental issues.（更自然、搭配常見 IELTS 用語）

十年間，醫療支出出現顯著的攀升。(escalation)
In the last decade, there was a marked escalation of medical expenditure.

escalation 常用於 cost（可以），marked escalation 用法 OK
medical expenditure → medical expenditures 更常見

修改後：In the last decade, there was a marked escalation in medical expenditures.
模範答案：Medical expenditures escalated markedly over the last decade.

黑色星期五後，銷售數字出現巨大跳升。(jump)
After Black Friday, a dramatic jump was seen in the number of sale.

number of sale → sales
dramatic jump was seen → 太口語，改成 was observed 或 occurred

修改後：After Black Friday, a dramatic jump in sales was observed.
模範答案：Sales experienced a dramatic jump following Black Friday.

2010 年後，GDP 迎來強勁的回升。(upturn)
After 2010, GDP underwent a strong upturn.

用 underwent OK
“strong upturn” 可以，但 usual collocation = sharp / noticeable

修改後：After 2010, GDP underwent a noticeable upturn.
模範答案：There was a noticeable upturn in GDP after 2010.

Part 3_decrease 同義動詞

失業率在 2015 年後開始緩慢下降。(fall)
The unemployment rate slowly fell after 2015.

幾乎完美。
小建議：slowly → gradually 更學術。

模範答案：The unemployment rate gradually fell after 2015.

該地區的出生率在整個期間持續下滑。(drop)
The birth rate in this area is continuously dropping during the entire peroid.

present continuous 不適合 Task 1（除非描述現在→不適用）
continuously dropping → steadily dropped（更自然）
during → over the entire period，during指期間內發生什麼事，不是期間整體趨勢

修改後：The birth rate in this area steadily dropped over the entire period.
模範答案：The birth rate in this area showed a steady drop over the period.

書籍銷量在 2000 年後明顯減少。(decline)
The book selling markedly decline after 2000.

book selling → book sales
decline → declined（時態）
markedly decline → declined markedly（副詞位置）

修改後：Book sales declined markedly after 2000.
模範答案：There was a marked decline in book sales after 2000.

物價在 1998 年出現短暫的小幅下降。(dip)
The costs of living in 1998 dipped briefly.

“the cost of living” (不可數) → cost，不是 costs

修改後：The cost of living dipped briefly in 1998.
模範答案：There was a brief dip in the cost of living in 1998.

由於政策改革，能源使用量被大幅減少。(reduce)
Due to the policy reformation, the usage of energy substantially reduced.

usage of energy → energy use
reduce 不及物不常用（需被動態）→ was substantially reduced
policy reformation → policy reform
reform 實際進行改革；政策、制度、法律的「改良」
reformation 改革的結果／過程（較正式、抽象）；或歷史專用語（宗教改革）

修改後：Due to policy reform, energy use was substantially reduced.
模範答案：Policy reform led to a substantial reduction in energy use.

傳統媒體的影響力在十年間逐漸弱化。(diminish)
The influence of conventional mass media is gradually diminishing in the recent decade.

“recent decade” 不用 recent（圖表是明確年份）
is diminishing（進行式）不適用 Task 1→ should be “diminished”
influence of conventional mass media → influence of traditional media（更自然）
conventional = 按照慣例、常規、標準做法（不一定古老）
traditional = 有歷史、有文化脈絡的傳統（通常更古老感）

修改後：The influence of traditional media gradually diminished over the decade.
模範答案：There was a gradual diminution in the influence of traditional media over the decade.

製造業的員工人數在全球競爭下持續縮減。(shrink)
The employee of manufacturing is consistently shrinking under the global competition.

employee → number of employees
is shrinking（時態）→ shrank（shrink-shrank-shrunk）
under the global competition → due to global competition

修改後：The number of employees in manufacturing shrank consistently due to global competition.
模範答案：Employment in manufacturing shrank steadily as global competition intensified.

在危機爆發後，股市立即暴跌至歷史低點。(plummet)
On the crisis, the stock plummet immediately to a historic low point.

On the crisis → During the crisis / Following the crisis
stock → stock prices
plummet → plummeted（時態）
low point → low

修改後：During the crisis, stock prices plummeted immediately to a historic low.
模範答案：Stock prices plummeted to a historic low during the crisis.

觀光人數在疫情期間驟降到最低點。(plunge)
The number of tourists sharply plunged into the lowest point.

plunge into 不自然 → plunge to
sharply plunged → plunged sharply（副詞位置）
lowest point → a low / record low

修改後：The number of tourists plunged sharply to its lowest point during the pandemic.
模範答案：Tourist numbers plunged to a record low during the pandemic.

水資源消耗量在此期間穩定下降。(go down)
The consumption of water steadily went down during this period.

“water consumption” 更自然

模範答案：Water consumption steadily went down over the period.

空氣品質在工業化後持續惡化。(deteriorate)
The air quality keeps deteriorating after the industrialization.

keeps deteriorating → deteriorated（Task 1 = past）
after the industrialization → after industrialisation（不可數）
deteriorate 多用「品質」「狀況」，你用對了。

修改後：Air quality deteriorated after industrialisation.
模範答案：There was a steady deterioration in air quality following industrialisation.

Part 4_decrease 同義名詞

通貨膨胀率在 2010 年後出現明顯下降。(fall)
There was a marked fall of inflation rate after 2010.

fall of inflation rate → fall in the inflation rate

修改後：There was a marked fall in the inflation rate after 2010.
模範答案：The inflation rate showed a marked fall after 2010.

近十年來，出生率持續下滑。(drop)
In the last decade, birth rate had a consistent drop.

birth rate → the birth rate
had a drop → experienced a drop
consistent drop → steady drop（more natural）

修改後：In the last decade, the birth rate experienced a steady drop.
模範答案：The birth rate showed a steady drop over the past decade.

報紙閱讀量在 2000 年後面臨大幅衰退。(decline)
The reader of the newspaper underwent a substantial decline after 2000.

reader of the newspaper → newspaper readership
underwent decline（可以，但更自然：saw / experienced）

修改後：Newspaper readership experienced a substantial decline after 2000.
模範答案：There was a substantial decline in newspaper readership after 2000.

新政策帶來了顯著的碳排放減少。(reduction)
The new policy brought a significant reduction of carbon emission.

reduction of → reduction in
carbon emission → carbon emissions（可數）

修改後：The new policy brought a significant reduction in carbon emissions.
模範答案：There was a significant reduction in carbon emissions following the new policy.

在 1990 年代初期，人口變化出現一次輕微的下滑。(dip)
In the early 1990, there was a slight dip of population.

early 1990 → early 1990s
dip of population → dip in population
population rarely “dips”，但可以練習用詞

修改後：In the early 1990s, there was a slight dip in population.
模範答案：The population showed a slight dip in the early 1990s.

金融危機後，全球經濟經歷了長期低迷。(downturn)
After the financial crisis, the global economics experienced a long-term downturn.

global economics → global economy
downturn 搭配 in + noun

修改後：After the financial crisis, the global economy experienced a long-term downturn.
模範答案：There was a prolonged downturn in the global economy following the financial crisis.