First English Writing Practice

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Writing Targets:

　　Practicing brainstorming in English and writing articles without doing other things like looking up vocabularies in a dictionary and take concentration concentrating with other things in 30mins.

Writing themes:

Recording daily life in first with diary form at the beginning

Content:

　　Aftering reading 派樂地’s article about sharing share in stuying aboard experience , I determine that I need to restart with in planing my TOEFL preparing project strategies, because her studying plan is really useful that instructing me like a lighttower lighthouse even encouraging encourages me to face this difficult road alone again.

　　I really have some bad habit to talk about nonsence nonsense, for example, I chat chatted with my friend about discussing whether deciding I decided to accept interview invitation from startup encruitment yesterday. I repeatedly continue to express expressed my problems related with to my disgusting confidence (self-esteem) and some impolite behaviour like giving response when receiving mails. And he actually advise some brand ideas I never thought before like confirming what I want to do next. It helps me that re-thinking I rethink about recent efforts and making decision with applying ph.D. degree in USA.

　　Umm...Actually everyone had their own decision when they asked you with for giving advices. It was a common problem that we didn’t understand what we want, even confusing it confuses ourself us by digging our true real thought in our mind. (Sighing...) Why do I always worry about these boring things that never occur. Do I have talent to become a poemer (poet) indeed? (Haha..Just kidding) I might be hungry in the near future. (nonsense)

　　I still don‘t make decisions with decide my career until now, but I don’t always think about these without actions take actions from now on. I really like these words which is speaked spoken by Carnegie.

Inactions breeds doubt and fear. Action breeds confidence and courage.

　　But I couldn’t implemet this thought despite that(Supplement 2) although I understood what it’s(its) meaning. But I never thought that I should make an effort (Supplement 3) insteads of thinking without actions before. It shows that I‘m a weak man who can’t take responsibilities with works. I found my bad habit, but it was really hard to fix it in past environment. And I even wrote that I can adjust myself to best status in quickly chaninging environment in my CV. (Aaaass..) It felt really bad if they noticed that I just talked about bull-shit bullshit insteads of actual abilities. (Ok..) I have made some an efforts to with becoming become better in these days. I’ve to insisit on doing actual actions instead of just thinking.

To be continued...

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Conclusions:

　　Cost time: one hour ( original 25 mins)

Inspecting with errors Inspection:

　　Cost time:　two hours　( original 5 mins)

Supplement:

1.　　 　　除了上面表示方向、位置的關係外，還有表示時間(如：at night, on Sunday,in June, during the day, since 1984, afterl unch, by tomorrow noon,till midnight,f rom 9 to 5, for three years)、地方(如：atthe airport,inTaiwan)、比較（如：looks like his father, as a young lady) 、交通工具（如：by bus, by train, on foot)、目的、代理、手段、...等各種不同關係。

2.　　 　　The weekly report is nearly done ____ the requirement of adding some tables. （雖然還需要加一些表格，但每週報告已經快要完成了。）

(A) although（連接詞）雖然、儘管 + complete sentence(S + V) (B) even though（連接詞）意思用法同 although，但語氣較強。+ complete sentence(S + V) (C) despite（介係詞）雖然、儘管 + (n or V-ing) (D) despite of 沒有這個用法，可改成 in spite of，意思用法同 despite。

3.　　 　　I think it's just that "make efforts to do" implies that you'll make more than one effort, and "make an effort to do" means you'll make just one big effort to achieve something. I think "make an effort to do" is more used than "make efforts to do". copy from hiNative

4. 　　 　　 ex. - 「舉例來說」英文正確且常見的用法是「e.g.」，而非「ex.」 　　「i.e.」意思是「that is to say」(也就是說)、「in other words」(換句話說、亦即)的意思

E.g. 　　Food is not allowed in class, i.e., you can't eat in class. 不准帶食物到課堂上來，也就是說(換句話說)，上課不准吃東西。 copy from blog xuite

5. 　　instead　　　　　　　　　　 adv. 替代 　　instead of ＋ (N. or N. phrase) prep. 而不是 E.g. 　　If you don’t have shaving cream at home, you can use shampoo instead. 　　The kid didn’t just rush to the finish line.Instead, he went to help another guy who stumble in the race.

Reference:

prep noun clause although, despite usage