試譯宋詞：點絳唇，桃源，醉漾輕舟

2023/02/13閱讀時間約 1 分鐘

作者：秦觀

醉漾輕舟，信流引到花深處。

塵緣相誤，無計花間住。

煙水茫茫，千里斜陽暮。

山無數，亂紅如雨。不記來時路。

我的試譯作品

I am drunk on a little boat which is taken by the river.

Following the water flows with trust, I am led into a place full of thick flowers.

I have so many daily chores, so I could not stay here with flowers.

Smokes over the water look foggy.

Sunset is far, far away from here.

countless mountains and rain-falling red flowers make me forget where I came from.

翻譯大師的作品：

Drunk, at random I float

Along the stream my little boat.

By misfortune, among

The flowers I cannot stay long.

Misty waters outspread,

I found the slanting sun on turning my head,

And countless mountains high.

Red flowers fall in showers,

I don't remember the way I came by.

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這是我為接下來的連載小說計劃所新創的專題，小手上路，不熟練之處請多包涵，題材均來自周遭人事物，再加上想像與自由發揮而成，寫作的時候我是作者，完成之後，讀者才是作者，可以邊看邊恣意想像，化文字為想像畫面，讓人物靈動有生命，讓我們共同完成這部作品。

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