試譯宋詞：點絳唇，桃源，醉漾輕舟

作者：秦觀

醉漾輕舟，信流引到花深處。

塵緣相誤，無計花間住。

煙水茫茫，千里斜陽暮。

山無數，亂紅如雨。不記來時路。

我的試譯作品

I am drunk on a little boat which is taken by the river.

Following the water flows with trust, I am led into a place full of thick flowers.

I have so many daily chores, so I could not stay here with flowers.

Smokes over the water look foggy.

Sunset is far, far away from here.

countless mountains and rain-falling red flowers make me forget where I came from.

翻譯大師的作品：

Drunk, at random I float

Along the stream my little boat.

By misfortune, among

The flowers I cannot stay long.

Misty waters outspread,

I found the slanting sun on turning my head,

And countless mountains high.

Red flowers fall in showers,

I don't remember the way I came by.