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Today is tired ,will…share about went to product factory in afternoon .

I and old coworker need see product problem .we driving car to Taipei.

Coworker share his story at car. story is like china work, department boss , Nike CEO talk with he.

This is my first once to factory. when I into the factory feel so hot and big voice .

In my view have many machine .old coworker talk product problem with factory boss.

In chat. Old coworker always smile talk with he. I know product problem is from factory .

but old coworker not angry to he, also say  how to ko problem .i am amazed.

Finally factory boss very happy  to we chat.

This thing let me know talk is important.

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輸出結果以下

Today was tiring. I will share about my visit to a product factory in the afternoon. My old coworker and I needed to see a product problem. We drove to Taipei in his car.

During the drive, my coworker shared his story. It was about his work experiences in China, meeting with department bosses, and even talking with the CEO of Nike.

It was my first time visiting a factory. When I entered, it felt very hot and noisy.

There were many machines in my sight. My old coworker discussed the product problem with the factory boss.

During the conversation, my old coworker always smiled while talking with him. I realized that the product problem originated from the factory. However, my old coworker wasn't angry with him; instead, he discussed how to solve the problem. I was amazed.

In the end, the factory boss was very pleased with our conversation.

This experience taught me the importance of communication.