【雅思大作文】-【教育类】教师职责
【雅思大作文】-【教育类】教师职责
题目
Some people think that teachers should be responsible for teaching students how to judge right and wrong and to behave well. Others say that teachers should only teach students about academic subjects. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
题目翻译
题目翻译：有人认为教师应该负责教学生如何判断是非，这样他们就能行为规范。但是其他人认为教师应该只教学生知识性的东西。讨论双方观点，并给出自己的观点。
题目解析
本题是典型的教育类的题目，提问方式属于第三类argumentation类即为双边讨论并给出自己的观点。题目难度略大，题干中对于内容进行了限定即only的出现，所以同学们不能去谈教授学术课程的重要性，而是谈及只教授学术课程的重要性。此题上次作为考题出现是2011年5月28日。有相似题目如下：Some people think schools should only teach students academic subjects. Others think schools should also teach students to discriminate between right and wrong. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
解题思路
首先这篇文章我们可以采用四段式或是五段式
开头段：背景句+话题引出+观点
正文段一：讨论第一类人态度：教授学生明辨是非的重要性
正文段二：讨论第二类人态度：只教授学生学术课程的重要性
结尾段：观点+总结句（观点可单独拎出来写一段，即构成五段式文章）
2.确定论点：
讨论第一类人态度：教授学生明辨是非的重要性
1.规避不良行为甚至于犯罪行为
2.带来优良的品质
讨论第二类人态度：只教授学生学术课程的重要性
1.节省时间，提高学习效率，为更高层次的学习奠定扎实基础
范文
There is no denying that a teacher’s role in the overall development of a student is multifaceted. As teacher, one’s primary obligation is to teach students academic knowledge. Yet, it is equally important for him to make sure that the students make progresses in other aspects.
First of all, whether one can effectively pass academic knowledge to the students makes the first and most important criterion for judging him as a qualified or unqualified teacher. The main task for the students to perform at school is to lay a solid foundation for their study at a higher level, thus the task for a teacher is to assist them to achieve this goal.
Second, a teacher’s obligation is not just confined to passing on academic knowledge to the students. The students are also supposed to develop their ability to judge right from wrong, thus becoming good citizens when they step out of school. To do this, a teacher will have more roles to play than just teaching academic subjects. He will have to set a good example of morality himself and share or discuss with his students his viewpoints towards different phenomena in the society. In a sense, apart from the role as pure academic teacher, he also serves the roles of students’ parents at school.
Admittedly, a teacher can relatively be more sure about the academic progress of the students, but not that sure about their moral development for the simple reason that the society is a big dyeing pool in which one’s being dyed into a certain color is the result of many factors of which family and many other things also have a role to play. Therefore, seen from this perspective, the influence of a teacher is, after all, limited.
From the above discussion, we can come to the conclusion that apart from teaching students academic subjects, a teacher should also try his best to mould their personality and moral image. Meanwhile, the society as a whole is also supposed to work together to ensure the students’ overall development.
范文翻译
毋庸置疑，老师在学生全面发展的道路上所发挥的作用是多方面的。作为教师，首要任务就是向学生传授学术知识，然而，确保学生在其它方面取得进步亦是同样重要的。
首先，能否有效地向学生传递学术知识是评判一名教师合格与否的第一、同时也是最重要的标准。学生在校期间的主要任务就是为更高层次的学习奠定扎实基础，因此，教师的任务就是帮助他们达到预期的目标。
第二，老师的职责并非仅仅局限于向学生传授学术知识。学生还应该不断提升自己辨别是非的能力，从而可以在步出校门时成为好公民。要做到这一点，老师要扮演的角色就不止是教授文化课这么单一了。他需要为学生树立道德典范并与学生分享或讨论对社会上诸多现象的观点和看法。
诚然，老师可以相对保证学生学习方面的进步，而在道德规范方面就不见得这么有把握。这主要是因为社会是个大染缸，最终被染成什么颜色是多方面共同作用的结果，这其中就有家庭和所有其它方面的影响，所以，从这个方面来讲，老师的作用毕竟还是有限的。
由此，我们可以得出这样的结论：老师除了教授学生学术知识外，还应该竭力塑造他们的个性与道德形象，同时，全社会应该协力确保学生们的全面发展。
范文高分句型
1. There is no denying that a teacher’s role in the overall development of a student is multifaceted
解析：there be句型的使用，建议同学们在文章使用一次；there is no denying that等同于undoubtedly，there is no doubt that等；multifaceted多方面的，多才多艺的。
First of all, whether one can effectively pass academic knowledge to the students makes the first and most important criterion for judging him as a qualified or unqualified teacher.
解析：whether one can effectively pass academic knowledge to students引导的主语从句；criterion意为标准、准则。
The students are also supposed to develop their ability to judge right from wrong, thus becoming good citizens when they step out of school.
解析：be supposed to应该；thus becoming good citizens是分词作状语的用法；when they step out of school是时间状语从句
Admittedly, a teacher can relatively be more sure about the academic progress of the students, but not that sure about their moral development for the simple reason that the society is a big dyeing pool in which one’s being dyed into a certain color is the result of many factors of which family and many other things also have a role to play.
解析：admittedly表示公认地，副词置于句首；reason that后接同位语从句；in which后接定语从句。
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